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Relinquished

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Relinquished

Mold me, baby…
        My body is like soft clay
                    awaiting your play
Form me to you roughened hands

I anticipate your bondage
My heart is in my throat
I wait….complete yielding 
          to you the master
                                I melt
inside these tender chains
           I tempt you 
and I know you see me

Lilacs in bloom
Lavender permeates the air
Succulent honey suckle swirls
beneath a canopy of stars
The moonlight filters through

I cannot fight the overtaking
                                    I am yours
In every breathless whimper
                                   I succumb….

Aye! You move me and consume me
I see nothing but your eyes
burning beneath this needy skin
Their intensity is my answer
Flames rise up inside me
         and I gasp
                   at the prison
                             of their fire
My desire licks my soul

A wild eyed angel
awaiting your bidding
Your wish is my command

In every moan
I am tortured

I wait…I wait…

For you I surrender
                          always…..

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  1. Date: 3/21/2009 5:57:00 PM
    Check your mail, Christie.

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 10:14:00 AM
    You make sweat, the rhythm is like a powerful workout ... leave my thirsty and swallowing. Love

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 11:17:00 AM
    Isn`t this passionate love so very wonderful??! Heart in my throat..is a great feeling.. really enjoyed this!! Robin

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 7:03:00 AM
    ....then I would recommend, that whomever You give "Your Precious Heart" unto? That they give all which they can, to win "Your Beauty" from upon that shelf!!!!~"Another Beautiful Write of Beautiful Love!!!!"~"My Love As Always, To 'You & Little Brianna,' John!!!!":):) On we go....

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 6:57:00 AM
    ....I do not know why it is dear Christie? But sometimes when I read "Your Precious & Lovely Writes," I envision this fluffy little pink teddy bear doll~that just screams out to one, to just pick her up and to hold her close to their heart!!!~Smile~Although, I know that "You Are" much much more than just a little teddy bear doll~Smile~but if You were....cont....

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 6:52:00 AM
    Ahh, such a very profound wish of longing and love~And I believe that whomever this is? Should not waste this opportunity, offered possibly unto them? From such a "Beautiful & Precious Lady & Soul!!!!"~For within my own opinion, that could become their own eternal regret potentially I believe!!!?....cont....

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 4:58:00 PM
    Awesome work, "awaiting your bidding Your wish is my command" strong lines...Raul

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 10:31:00 AM
    I am simply Blown Away... !! there really isn't much else I can say.... wouldn't this man count himself amongst heavens most fortunate; to be sure he would, and does. Exceptional poetry Christie

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 7:47:00 AM
    Wow, someone's on a roll with the romanticism. It's incredible how well you write on any subject, actually capturing the reader, in this case making him wish or think it's written for him. Surrendering of one's self is the epitome of love. You've captured it so well in this write. Michael

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 7:19:00 AM
    Yikes! Christie, my dear girl, you make us all feel like we need a little 'relief' : ) Wow. This is beautifully HOT. The Queen of Passion rules again! Amazing write! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 4:01:00 AM
    Love this tanka 'inner poem' Christie Lilacs in bloom Lavender permeates the air Succulent honey suckle swirls beneath a canopy of stars The moonlight filters through Excellent work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 6:18:00 PM
    Whew....I need to wipe my brow...anyone have a cool cloth!! Whew...Christie...goodness dear girl!

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 5:14:00 PM
    Double Wow, this is so intimate and passionate..Oh my...Hot Hot Hot-Beautiful picture here delivering the most Incredible imagery..(" In every moan I am tortured") My My My.MMM MMM MMM..You take the reader on a magical fantasy ride...This was deep indeed..Excellent write! God Bless *Tyesha

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 4:10:00 PM
    So I just stop sticking out my tongue at you..LOL..you should put back my comment.. I wrote the perfect comment hours ago..LOl..this is still a winner.

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 4:01:00 PM
    Very intriguing, Christie, with a hint of "kinky" that I find quite alluring. I think we've dated some of the same men. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 3:45:00 PM
    Yikes, girl! Sex ooozes out of you like...like...well, like water from a fall! lol Someone is going to e wuite happy to receive this one! Love, me

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 3:05:00 PM
    This is passionate and seductive yet gentle and special. I especially love the lines "Lilacs in bloom Lavender permeates the air Succulent honey suckle swirls beneath a canopy of stars The moonlight filters through." This is wonderful imagery of a heart filled with beauty and love. Beautifully done. Smiles from Lolita