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I without You

What's the sun without a shine
What's a glass without its wine
What's a beach without an ocean
What's a ride without its motion
What's a car without its wheels 
What's an orange without its peel
What's a foot without a shoe
What am I without You

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  1. Date: 4/8/2009 6:32:00 PM

    cute and convincing. jhl

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 9:14:00 PM

    Very lovely write, So warm and fresh-- Creatively crafted with an interesting perspective...This piece flowed so beautifully--Love the ending, God Bless *Tyesha