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Darling

Darling, I seek thee
Passion burns within I
Darling, seek me
Without doubt, oh my..

Awakened morning – a smile
Pure content strains
O darling, stay awhile
Thee is what – remains

--- Darling! I seek thee
On the darkest night
Darling, I seek me
To prove what is right

Intention bares no solutions
Yet thy symphony sings
For you are my resolutions
An interpret fellow, it rings

Upon woody soaked door
Subdued into the rain
I knock two times for more
Ego less, I shall obtain.

A heart that beats four times
A heart that needs four rhymes
A heart that pleads sometimes
My heart at the mercy of your hands

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  1. Date: 9/12/2009 4:29:00 AM

    My heart at the mercy of your hands..what a beauty you ve captured once more in verses...outstanding indeed--Charma

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 10:15:00 PM

    I love the passion!... Sabrina

  1. Date: 5/11/2009 2:20:00 PM

    Wonderfully passionate! Thank you for reading my poem..

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 5:27:00 PM

    Great writing again. :) I love "upon woody soaked door subdued into the rain I knock two times for more ego less, I shall obtain" And those last four lines are super! Love Christie *^_^*

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 8:23:00 AM

    i enjoyed this write especially the last stanza great job!

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 2:29:00 AM

    That's a beautiful one Sami...As usual...Carries passion... Take care my friend, Farah

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 12:59:00 AM

    Oh my is right!!! Well done Peace Fathima