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Haiku 22309

wind blows warm and crisp
       sunshine streams in my window-
               distant train rumbles.

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  1. Date: 3/2/2009 12:23:00 PM

    Nice use of multi-sense imagery in this haiku. Sounds like the makings of a good day to me. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen

  1. Date: 3/1/2009 10:52:00 AM

    Nice Haiku, kinda sad and forlorn. Nicely done. Glad you enjoyed my poem also. Thank you. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 2/28/2009 7:39:00 AM

    This is wonderful my friend.. love the images.