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Battlefield

My life is like a battle field. I am constantly struggling and trying to better my life. I try to 
better myself but there are people who are constantly trying to influence you to do bad. The 
battle field is a hard place to be on. Life is not just fun and games, it is a constant fight. 
People think that life is easy, but if that was the case then the world would be perfect. My 
battle field rages as I struggle to become a better person and a teenage mother.

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  1. Date: 4/24/2009 4:22:00 AM

    Sierra, I myself is a father of three children, a boy and two girls. Build them up in Christian discipline and instruction and they will be your pride and the pride of our country. Ernilando

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 9:22:00 AM

    Yes, indeed, life can be like a battlefield but we fight our battles and if we remain strong, sometimes we conquer and come out a winner. It is indeed a struggle to be a teenage mother. A hard life for anyone, but I sense a self awareness within the girl in this and I think she is on her way to surviving that battle and finding peace and love within herself. Good luck. Love and hugs, Christie