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Spring warms to dazzle Dew moistens the erect stems Timid buds will blush
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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:50:00 AM
    "I see how Doobie didn't use the: How is the weather? approach. I do enjoy the theme here a lot. I suppose this could be re-written in such a way to mask a double or triple meaning....written in such a way to appease the certain modern American haiku style that is clinical, mechanical, cloned, plain as porridge, incorporating a juxt so wide, the "mind-picture" achieves a level of inanity akin to watching paint dry. Exactly the modern American style that I have grown an aversion towards."

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 3:37:00 PM
    not haiku..free verse..too much personification..not plain as porridge..what did you actually see? a budded flower covered with dew? it is free verse because you are interfering with how the readers see the image but making your subjective impression so clear..you don't let them have their own impression..and there's no true ahaHA! its cause and effect..Uncle yet [Deb ducks under the table] L & L

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:44:00 PM
    How is the weather? LOL~! (actually, the erotic double-entendre is lovely)

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 8:12:00 PM
    Reviewing this sexy nature haiku from long ago. Bring on more like these again!!!

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 12:57:00 PM
    Hello,, Ruben how are you.. stopping by to congratulate!!!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 11:13:00 AM
    Many congrats on your featured piece Ruben, wonderful as always Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 7:33:00 AM
    nice description through this haiku. loved it

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 11:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 7:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Ruben, the master of haiku! Lovely spring imagery. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 1:48:00 PM
    Dear Ruben, you are missed. Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup. God bless. Annalise

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 12:52:00 PM
    Coingratulations on your poem being featured this week, Ruben

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 1:03:00 AM
    Hmmm, a sexy nature poem methinks!! And me likes! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 1:34:00 PM
    i love the warmth of summer and spring ,it s so sad it ends in autumn..beautiful write..missed this--Charma

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 6:54:00 AM
    Interesting Haiku here. Untone of something else. Keep writing. Thanks for comments on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 11:52:00 PM
    Thanks for your welcome comments today Ruben or should I say Barnabas.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/14/2009 9:16:00 PM
    You are right! they do blush!Beautiful poetry! thanks for your nice words on mine my friend-seema

  1. Date: 5/14/2009 2:18:00 PM
    Ruben, i would love to hear this poem recited to a time lapse film of timid buds blushing, it would be quite awesome, James.

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 12:02:00 AM
    Excellent work Ruben.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comment

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 3:32:00 PM
    Wonderful reflection of spring! Great Haiku Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/2/2009 5:02:00 AM
    A great expression of spring, i always love the smell and look of spring. beautiful write Abe, by the way welcome to poetry soup

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