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Mystery

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Mystery

Looking out across
the sea,a beautiful
sunset looking back at me.

Watching the waves 
as they come in,not 
being able to see them again.

A mystery I've found
within this write,
for you can't see the
same wave twice.

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  1. Date: 3/2/2009 7:54:00 PM
    Wonderful image, Marie, and a wise observation: no two waves are alike, just as no two snowflakes. Best to you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/22/2009 8:03:00 AM
    A very telling poem Marie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 10:04:00 PM
    Nice imagery Marie, the context of the poem is great...Raul

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 8:17:00 PM
    A lovely flow to this poem, I like the last verse and if and when I see a wave again I bet I will remember it, Blessings, Ron

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 7:40:00 PM
    I love it! You must live bt the ocean too!? Hello my dear and gifted friend and poetess Marie Prance!!! What a truly lovely and picturesque moment you painted here dear lady~Smile~much prettier than black bottles huh!! Smile~I hope that you are doing wonderfully tonight~and that waves are shimmering sweetly for you underbeath the stars!! "Lovely Write Marie~ Warmth & Blessings Always To You & Your Loves, John!:)

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 6:51:00 AM
    Forever changing, life stands still for no one or anything.....love this, always, Christy