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Our Glass

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Through the same glass another sand sags dragging excuses thick extensions unwelcome going on going by going down constant ripples without reflections that engulf this soul Somebody find me, Anybody

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  1. Date: 3/9/2014 3:14:00 PM
    Hi Ruben, always like to go back to where the creative juices started my friend. You can always find some little gems and this is one. I do Love the way you make the shape. The words just roll off the tongue. The vision complete you paint it on to your canvas and we have a pearl before us. Really enjoyed the read Ruben. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 5:43:00 PM
    boy, and you do deep behind that fun-filled spirit, ruebn... simply amazing.. cingrats on your win!.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 10:03:00 PM
    this poem is deeper than appears on first reading a second read reveals the desperation and haunting loneliness...well done and congradulations

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:34:00 PM
    Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the win, Ruben

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:15:00 PM
    I hope your at the creme of the crop atop the bubbly champagne, a little fizz is always good for the soul Ruben, I drink to your health and success, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 5:45:00 PM
    well ruben, I had to place this one for its quirky originality - I wish I could fathom how to create these shapes on here! I loved the wordplay in the title - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Hey Mr. Ohhhhhhhhhhh, ;) am I the only one who hates folks hiding behind foolish names [I guess not? how ya been?] and Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Still my favourite poem..Just stopping by to thsnkyou for the past times you supported my poetry..I might be busy..but had to say tnks and regards to Beatriz.Caw

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 3:32:00 PM
    Rueben LIKES my input [I thought] so why not give Mr. O more attention LOL when you've had enough attention holler UNCLE!!! [Ok perfectly done for the topic! For me the most troublesome word was /sags/..sand sags? ..naw you can do better [Through the hour glass/ so slowly sand lags?] L & L

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 9:07:00 AM
    just took in your first here in souo, Ruben, impressive and a wonderful poem, a very clever and insight poem, love this.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 12:52:00 AM
    Yes, the sand of time runs inexorably towards the end/fulfillment - it is our perception which validates it. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 1:17:00 AM
    When does the sand stop flowing

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 1:26:00 PM
    I found you !My favorite poem ever. .Celene!

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 2:22:00 PM
    Great concrete poem (or is it shape?) The last line is very effective for the topic you are addressing. As you can see, I gave up looking for last place i left off. I will just start at your very first post and work backwards! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:15:00 PM
    Oh I like this very much.. nice idea of the glass and luv that last line too.. and engulf this soul is so powerful Ruben.. good luck in the contest .. appreciate all your great tips tonight... will try to do better in the next one assuming I can grow some patience... must be all that Italian blood pumping through my veins..haha..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 10:58:00 PM
    Ahhhhhhhhhh HA!!! A Concrete Verse & WHY isn't it in my contest. HELLO ARGINTINA!

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 7:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ruben>>James

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 2:17:00 AM
    Awesome write and congrats on being featured this week...The Southern Belle

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 5:34:00 PM
    Ruben, this is amazing! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 4:48:00 PM
    Congratulations of this featured piece feels like my life. Sara

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