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Pathetic

My bloodshot mind sees all,
screaming from the center 
of my personal hell.
The cloud keeps raining
black and blue,
mixing tears with blood-
both shed over you.
And the pain keeps mushrooming 
out and away;
scars of ebony flames 
seal over my way out.
But still I see the black stars
spreading hopeless over
the midnight-white
and the blossoming flower
rooted in my heart.

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  1. Date: 3/25/2009 9:06:00 PM
    Sad thoughts, but beautifully expressed!

  1. Date: 3/1/2009 8:27:00 AM
    I felt this write, like I've been there. A very good write Micaela

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 2:08:00 PM
    like this poem because of the concept and it had feelings to it. like te first part the best My bloodshot mind sees all, screaming from the center of my personal hell

  1. Date: 2/23/2009 5:33:00 PM
    wow deep stuff... ahh depression... bad yet good for inspiration.. been there too girl.