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  1. Date: 2/18/2009 8:04:00 PM
    Okay. . this one has all the struggle, patience and time we kids could only know about how 'they', our parents, can grow up too. Nicely done Carrie.

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 8:08:00 AM
    Thank you Robin for your kind words and comments,especially appreciated today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 5:09:00 AM
    That certainly is undeniable love. That's trust, respect and puregood stuff. Anexcellent flowing read. Michael

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 3:49:00 AM
    This is pure beauty Carrie..I am such a sucker for the love thing and you are the type of writer that always have my heart because you write with such sexy elegance that I just want to live in your moments. I really love are such a romantic..loved it very, chris.

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 12:39:00 AM
    Lovely romantic poem of true love Carrie.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 7:12:00 PM
    You complete me Carrie! This is so healthy! Perfection, simply perfection. Laurie

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 7:11:00 PM
    Carrie I just couldn't agree more - When my wife and I were first getting "Clean" it was important that we each ran our recovery program separate even while being together - Here is how awful and how distorted drugs make our lives - When my wife and I were on drugs we were like cats and dogs when it came to trust - we fought all the time over Jealousy - Since we have been clean we never fight at all - I guess we both survived so much bad that now everything seems beautiful - YF4L, God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 6:24:00 PM
    It is wonderful to find this kind of love,shared between two individuals that surpasses all feeling or emotion. I admire the ones that have have it and hope that they treasure it forever, for this type of love is rare..Beautifully written and well expressed..God Bless and Best Wishes To You*Tyesha