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lost it

Despise how hard you try, my empty soul
Will not be filled with ancient decaying lore
I refuse to crave anyone’s forgiveness
I reject outdated trivial ideals
My inner rhythm guides my apprehensive steps
I can find my nirvana and understand
Grow and learn, fall and accept defeat
I am much too brave to be threaten to believe
Obsequious sheep and coercive benevolence
I am no longer part of you
Even so I keep my head held high and fight
I am able to make mistakes
Without fearing the implausible consequence
I accept a benign absolute emptiness above
I cannot be sedated by hollow hopes and pernicious promises
I dare to think, I strive to disbelieve
The light I seek, the energy I crave
The meaning for more, the desire for completeness 
Comes not from above but from inside
So I will close my young eyes, open my daring heart 
And make the best of the palpable reality 
Until eternal slumber engulfs my final breath  

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  1. Date: 8/22/2009 4:08:00 AM
    Lovely write>>James

  1. Date: 2/22/2009 2:12:00 PM
    Amazing, powerful, and controversial! good poem, Luci! Let me tell you a secret: Our God is inside, above...everywhere! Don't tell anyone. good luck. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 12:25:00 PM
    Luci, Bravo for being able to "keep your head held and high and fight." It seems too many artists give up. I have seen so many sad poems here, but yours has a bright outcome. Well done, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/13/2009 12:28:00 PM
    The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Keep on writing! Karen