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His type of Valentine

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His type of Valentine



Does your heart still miss a beat
When you get that special smile
Do you always try for him -
Just to go that extra  mile.

Do you still buy the pressies
On those very special days
And take him for an odd weekend
Of course, that's when he pays.

Have you kept that sparkle up
After very many years
Can you still make up with him
After rows and salty tears.

Would you stand behind him
If others turned their back
Compliment, assure him
If his ego took a whack.

If he was redundant
Could you stretch a loving hand
Would your love outweigh the cash
If you'r loosing twenty grand.

If you answer, yes to these
It seems to me, as though
That's you're his perfect valentine
And he really loves you so.

Go on and be outrageous
You've been really sweet and meek
Just book an online holiday
With him, of course next week









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  1. Date: 2/20/2009 3:40:00 AM
    Déirdre nice poem...Raul

  1. Date: 2/15/2009 6:23:00 AM
    If only people could appreciate it when women are this way, sadly most do not. Very creative writing, hope you had a good valentine's day.....Aleera

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 9:21:00 AM
    lovely poem deirdre very witty

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 12:42:00 AM
    Thanks for your witty response Deirdre.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/13/2009 1:27:00 PM
    Dierdre, what a delightful verse! Poetry soup has undoubtedly attracted some amazing talent. Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/13/2009 7:54:00 AM
    Have a great Valentines Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/12/2009 4:27:00 PM
    This is wonderful! It is humorous and sweet. A lovely Valentine message! Well done! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 2/12/2009 12:25:00 PM
    very sweet & neat! Light & Love Debbie

  1. Date: 2/12/2009 12:23:00 PM
    Yes , Deirdre , as only you can , with that special blend of witty charm .... Well done & enjoy that hol .......

  1. Date: 2/12/2009 11:56:00 AM
    Deirde - What a cleaver and witty poem that is just beautifully written (Your not a travel agent are you) and of which sells the reader on the message of the poem - Wonderful poetry - God Bless, MJ