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If

If I picked you a flower,
If I hold your hand,
If I gave you a kiss,
Could I be your man?
If we went for a drive,
If we went to a show,
If I took you to dinner,
Could I be the winner?
If I bought you a ring,
If you met my family,
If I made you a drink,
If I gave you some candy,
If I took you to my house,
If we made love all night,
Could I be the one,
To always hold you tight?

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  1. Date: 2/11/2009 8:08:00 AM

    Sounds like a lot of questions, I do so hope you get the right answer. Very smooth and great offerings to get the love back. Michael

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 7:55:00 AM

    This is a very cool write..Digging it very much..love the way you break up the if in thepoem..really cool write.