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Threads of Heaven

Threads of Heaven
     by Amy Swanson  2.7.2009


Standing in a dream
     deepest heart's imaginings
... whirling into view ...
     ... I see you ... 


Dancing in the sun
     living life and laughing loud
... savoring your smile ...
     ... please stay a little while ...


Colors soft and muted hues
     silver strands and crystal blues
... a softly flowing stream ...
     ... within this lucid dream ...


Reaching forth to take my hand
     beckoning me to this land
... threads of Heaven drift apart ...
     ... now woven deep within my heart.

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  1. Date: 2/13/2009 6:42:00 AM

    such a beautiful flowing poem. moved me. thanks for your lovely words x vik

  1. Date: 2/9/2009 8:23:00 AM

    Hi Amy... lovely, fluent writing... !

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 8:00:00 AM

    This title is wonderful and I just adore the flow in this beautiful poem. Briilliant, my kindred friend. "silver strands and crystal blues...." Wow. Love me on the beach...drink in hand...LOL

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 7:39:00 AM

    Beautifully written..lots of sweet language in this piece that makes the poem flow so well.