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Forest of Jade

Jade painted on branches and flowers
Depth of impulsive sedation engulfing
A journey into a life of misery and epic sadness
Follow thy path of destiny…
Yet behold my love, a thousand bares within.

A forest of jade sparkling into redemption
Sickening of interior rage surrounding
Come...for the adventure awaits thee
Change? Mi lady have you not have harmony?
This transition persuades elements of desire

Sun shall shine tomorrow dawn, yet it is…dawn.
Pressure of indecisive relations of life appearing
A world where imperfections lay into despair
Yet consider. Consider the memorial of transition
But these...these imperfections interest all comers…

Following darkness follows a trail of light
Bare me the consequences of redemption
For this imperfections shatter my dignity to live
But embraces my soul to strive and fight.
I beg of thee.
Change me.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2010 11:53:00 PM

    this is interesting. and a wonderful write on the way to light through a once dark soul. the color jade in your poem. i created a character of that name. this poem reminded me of her personality in a way. if you're interested in why it made me think back on it.my poem is called +black crystal++a dark dream+ and //mysteries of hate// magnificant poem i read today.may the dark always find their light. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 6:46:00 PM

    beautiful,amaziing--Charma

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 1:28:00 PM

    I can so relate to this magnificent verse wholey. I was moved by it. Thank you for the most kind remarks on my poem "Melt Away" comments as yours is what a writer lives for! :) ~please keep sharing your work here and may you find success in your writing! Sincerely, Lucinda

  1. Date: 3/1/2009 9:29:00 AM

    Much to think about in your words. Interesting end and fitting title. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 3/1/2009 5:02:00 AM

    A wonderful poem Sami...The title initially makes one ponder..Thanks for sharing... Farah

  1. Date: 2/9/2009 2:13:00 PM

    Ah, if only life worked that way ... smile ... the only "change" worth having comes from within, and without our imperfections how indeed would we know the ideal? Wonderful thought provoking write here, Sami !!

  1. Date: 2/7/2009 8:09:00 PM

    Sami you broke that down rather nicely - well written with a style all of its own - Very enjoyable read - God Bless, MJ