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Haiku number eighteen

Note:
Bing! I didn't forget the last word



Red Orange yellow
Green Blue Violet spectrum
Somewhere over the

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  1. Date: 2/3/2009 6:09:00 AM

    Makes us all say the word out loud when we get to the last line. Very clever! Michael

  1. Date: 2/2/2009 4:19:00 PM

    Nice poem Deirdre, you're on fire with your haiku's...Raul

  1. Date: 2/1/2009 10:36:00 PM

    Pretty self-explanitory and great by the way. My favorite form.

  1. Date: 2/1/2009 8:21:00 PM

    Very lovely and creative, Nicely done..God Bless*Tyesha

  1. Date: 2/1/2009 6:18:00 AM

    Lets go .... rainbow .... ooops , sorry , you don't like footles , Deirdre ..... Sorry again , this really is a very clever presentation , so well done " Judy "............ Rgds. " Scarecrow "....