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Should I or Should I Not??

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Below is the poem entitled Should I or Should I Not?? which was written by poet Roje Brown. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Should I or Should I Not??

Torn in two my body and soul it makes my heart feels so cold

 Logics against hope,common sence againt stupidity

 Dont tell me what to say or what to do

its got be hard for you all to understand

But my feelings are real you haven't got a clue

They may have a point or may even be right

Even though the chances are slim and the road looks grim

If at the end there's a chance you'll be there its worth the risk

but what if your not  and treat me like a snob would that be worth it

It's really a decision that only you can help me thorough

please baby tell me what should i or should not do

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  1. Date: 2/1/2009 11:28:00 AM
    The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 1/31/2009 10:30:00 PM
    Touching poem Roje, I hate waiting for an answer, best of luck though...Raul

  1. Date: 1/31/2009 6:56:00 PM
    Good to see a fellow Jamaican here. I like this piece...i hope to see you more in the Soup. Keep doing what you're doing. :-)

  1. Date: 1/29/2009 2:47:00 PM
    Follow your heart, that is what I would do, but only you can decide that answer.....pray about your decision.....always, Christy