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Profond intérieur

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Profond intérieur

From my breaking point, i try to reframe
All my thoughts seem to sway
My heart hates what my mind became

Every emotion in my body, i try to tame
my mind says go, my heart says stay
from my breaking point, i try to reframe

For my mistakes, i take the blame
maybe we'll be again some day
my heart hates what my mind became

I smile just to hide my shame
For my wrongs to you, I will pay
from my breaking point, i try to reframe

I feel crooked with no aim
alone again, tonight I'll lay
my heart hates what my mind became

Now harshly we play in loves game
Disappearing fast like snow in may
From my breaking point, i try to reframe
My heart hates what my mind became

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  1. Date: 9/11/2009 10:10:00 AM
    Excellent Villanelle! So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 12:27:00 PM
    I can relate to this fantastic line: "My heart hates what my mind became"....great write, Rebecca! Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 8:09:00 AM
    This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 6:16:00 AM
    Hi Rebecca Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry with us. Congrats on your feature write this week! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 7:00:00 PM
    Rebecca - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 2:24:00 PM
    Rebecca, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 3:04:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 7:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Rebecca. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 5:46:00 AM
    Congratulations, Rebecca Lynn on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read brilliant poetry like this. It's beautifully written and deeply insightful Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann