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The Box Spring Bed Rumor....

Somewhere in luisianna, On Saterday Nights...
In some Abandoned Mental Hospitial..
Saterday Nights, The doors unlock...
In one of the rooms A box spring Bed appears...

Sleep there, and sometime in the night you shall be awakened..
An old man, In a white Shirt with words upon it...
Don't scream, Or be alarmed, He will ask a question about your life..
Answer correctly and he will give you a photo...

Look at this photo, Study it carefully...
It will show how you'll die
Once you recieve the picture and review it
You must leave immediatly...

It's Quite a wonder But I must warn you..
If the picture is of the man before you, the one who gave you the picture
Running away won't help
Neither wil Screaming...

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  1. Date: 5/5/2009 1:07:00 PM

    I like this. I want to hear more. Right away my mind jumped to a short story, maybe longer.... I am impressed with the setting too.

  1. Date: 2/2/2009 3:52:00 PM

    This is really good

  1. Date: 1/24/2009 10:02:00 AM

    Wow ~Jese

  1. Date: 1/21/2009 6:44:00 PM

    powerful-is all i can say and somewhat sad-good write-rhonda hero