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midnight prisoner

What is it?
That flames me with it's presence.
Like a dark horse it carries me
to places I have never been
and show me secrets hidden to me.
Like a raging messenger
and crosses the thickness of my thought,
stirrs my spirit man out of slumber,
sometimes changing my world.
What is it about the dreams of my head ?
and the visions of my bed?

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  1. Date: 8/26/2009 5:56:00 AM

    I am sure that is what all of us who are writing are feeling from time to time. I like the way you have expressed it here. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 6:57:00 AM

    hey Omolayo, this is a very thoughtful piece, inspiring and out of this world... yeah. i am proud of you sis. this is the best poetry site ever,,,, laughs. keep writing

  1. Date: 1/20/2009 6:28:00 AM

    Odolade - Excellent and clearly written message - Many times our dreams take us to places unknown - Great poem - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 1/19/2009 12:04:00 PM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup. Keep writing and sharing your poetry with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/19/2009 4:29:00 AM

    Oopsie....Welcome to the soup, Ololade, you certainly bring with you some wonderous ingredients!:) Mikki

  1. Date: 1/19/2009 4:20:00 AM

    Greetings to you! This is masterfully done, Ololade. The profound imagery, feels to me, to create a crackling atmosphere. The "dreams" and "visions" can make great companions, though they do envoke a feeling of restlessness. Wishing the best to you and your! Mikki