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Don't leave me

Don't leave me standing in the rain,
just because you don't know my pain.
Don't leave me missing you so much,
knowing I can't have your gentle touch.
Don't leave me knowing I love you,
when I can't have you.




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  1. Date: 1/22/2009 3:00:00 PM

    I love it! That's all I can say. You have amazing talent! Peace n Blessings! ~Oreo

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 8:00:00 PM

    it's so hard I know to not be able to have or let go of the one with whom you love so I hope all works out in the end for you I feel your pain in your poems this is so well penned but so painful to read as this one hits home for me as well as some of your other ones, love can sometimes cause more pain than pleasure but it's a risk we still have to endeavour

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 9:54:00 AM

    Great work Serenity, teasing and emotional play hurts so much...Raul

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 9:22:00 AM

    This is heartbreaking, a desperate plea to a love that cannot be..I hope all your dreams do come true. beautifully written and passionately expressed. Great poem..*Tyesha