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A Whisper on the Wind

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A Whisper on the Wind

I was a gentle whisper upon the wind

That swept over the green valleys

I climbed the height of the highest mountain

And murmured softly as I descended the slopes

I picked up speed and started moving swiftly

Over the plateau and the sun swept plains

I picked up speed and started to howl

Whistling around corners and pushing gust after gust

 Bending the trees till they touched the earth

I reached the open water and the lapping waves became huge swells

Higher and higher went the waves until the white caps hit the shore

I took the rain and pelted it against the earth

 Harder and harder as if in an angry rage

Then I blew my self out on the open ocean waves

Exhausted, I once again became a whisper on the wind

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  1. Date: 4/27/2014 9:59:00 PM
    BRILLIANT ;) ;) :)

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 11:57:00 PM
    wow, one of your BEST I just happened to come upon here. I know you love rhyme, but you can really let go with free verse, dearie. A big fave on this one, and I saved all your comments to me for last. I read them and now it is nearly 1 a.m. So sorry I never have time to read more than a few of your poems, Phylis. thanks for those comments and it's fun to read what you have to say about you life with them . LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 5:45:00 AM
    Loved this, it gave me the visual of being the wind and transversing the landscape. Thanks for posting :)

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 9:11:00 PM
    fine twist of personification in this cool poem! Phyllis! jim

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 12:00:00 PM
    thsi is a very beautiful piece!! keep writing cause it will take you far... Ciara =)

  1. Date: 3/13/2009 11:39:00 AM
    Powerful. Amazing write i love it. ~Jese

  1. Date: 3/12/2009 11:05:00 AM
    A powerful journey of words, delighted to be read.

  1. Date: 2/26/2009 12:51:00 PM
    Fine personification in this work. Nature has its charms and this poem exalts them. Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 11:53:00 PM
    Thank you for your observations Phyllis.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 1:20:00 PM
    Thank you, for your comments, I could only wish I recieved as many for my book. I am going to read some of your poetry. I'll get back to you. Always, David an "Unknown" father.

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 9:27:00 AM
    Nice use of imagery that seems to take the reader on a journey with you. Wonderful last line. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 8:59:00 AM
    Phyllis, I'll have to read more of your work. I really enjoy poems like this that take the reader on a journey. Good job! Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 10:59:00 AM
    This is wonderful personification! Love the gentleness of the read and the descriptive quality and flow. Beautiful! Michael

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 8:39:00 AM
    somehow this sounds like your soul is traveling around and it is beautiful. janetta

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 4:34:00 PM
    a vision of poetry has been captured in this piece. i traveled along the journey the whisper being "love" being carried to the many places the piece took me. beautiful. John H. Loving III

  1. Date: 1/13/2009 6:39:00 PM
    A beautiful description of the wind....breathtaking. I know your feeling here.:) Love, Sara

  1. Date: 1/12/2009 10:55:00 AM
    The wind comes alive. I love whistling around corners and pushing gust after gust.. this is filled with a lot of beautiful lines..well written.

  1. Date: 1/12/2009 8:24:00 AM
    You personified the wind so beautifully. Swept me away. Awesome write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/12/2009 3:33:00 AM
    Excellent poem with great imagery...Raul

  1. Date: 1/11/2009 11:34:00 PM
    Like the personification style of this one Phyllis.One to add into my favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

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