Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Healing Flesh

Yoni Dvorkis Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Healing Flesh which was written by poet Yoni Dvorkis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Yoni Dvorkis

Best Yoni Dvorkis Poems

+ Fav Poet

Healing Flesh

Do not see me as I am

  Or you'll be disappointed

See instead my wall of flesh
 
  Dismembered and disjointed


I'll make sure the bones will mend
 
  And never show their age

Rest inside my warmest thoughts

  Of quiet tempered rage


Discover endless reasons why
 
  The flesh will always fail

Embodiments of truer cause

  Could look behind the veil

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 10/29/2009 6:17:00 AM
    Very impressive piece! Flawless. the rhyme is beautifully structured so that it flows smoothly off the tongue. And the message comes out at a tempered pace.

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 7:07:00 PM
    Congratulations on the feature, great poem

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 4:52:00 PM
    Good one! Congrad's Yoni ! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 3:37:00 PM
    Stimulating piece of literary art that is sublime in form with a sentencing structure that is polished bright beyond the effulgence of any gem known to man.Sincerely,Eric

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 1:14:00 PM
    Masterfully written quatrain, Yoni. The second stanza is my favorite, although each one shows depth and introspection that is admirable. Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 1:04:00 PM
    I really like the flow of your words in this poem.

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 9:00:00 AM
    I love these philosophies which say we are not our body ... they've never had arthritis ... LOL ... wonderful write here Yoni and how nice to have it a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 8:25:00 AM
    Congrats on this selection. All appearance is deception and we as a society love it. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 8:05:00 AM
    Hi, Yoni! Congratulations on your featured poem this week. This is a beautiful Quatrain filled with honesty and truth! Keep on writing, smile...you have got talent! I wish you continued success. Warmest regards, Andrew.

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 1:08:00 AM
    Hi Yoni Congratulations,a well deserved feature..excellent..Yoni,hope sunshine smiles reach your heart today..Charma

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 5:18:00 AM
    Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week Yoni >> James

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 4:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Yoni. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2009 6:33:00 PM
    Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 10:07:00 AM
    Excellent poetry - wow - wonderfully penned - excellent Rhyme and Flow - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 10:05:00 AM
    Marvelous cadence and rhyme... once again, your words and imagery transcend the ordinary. Well done Yoni! Best wishes, Keith