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Another Lonely Day

There was this girl I once knew
Happy with no worries
Had all that she dreamed for
Till daddie told her to dream no more
Then he left
Went away
Forgot about her and his family
Left her there with so much
Hate and anger inside 
She just cried and cried
Till she turned 12
Took her anger out on herself
And it lasted till she was 16
Now she stopped 
Cutting
But tears, hate, and pain still fill her heart
So
She just cry and await
Another lonely day...

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  1. Date: 12/31/2008 7:39:00 AM

    rEALLY TOUCHED ME. kEEP STRONG. u SEEM WONDERFUL. hAD A NICE CHAT WITH U B4.

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 12:11:00 AM

    truly amazing!! I know you don't know me and I don't know you but I hope you know how special you are, you may not be able to see him but know he's always there and call on him, everyday, every hour, every second and he will answer, give all your burdens, worries, fears, over to him leave them there. My mom always tells me, it's to much to carry it with me, turn it over to the lord and he will work it out. I see it in my life and I hope you see it in yours, look at all the gifts hes given you.

  1. Date: 12/29/2008 11:58:00 AM

    Unbelievably touching. If I can offer a personal reflection, as I'm not a stranger to anger or cutting, I like to think you're (all of us) lonely only when you're completely sure you're alone. Thank you so much.