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The Bruised and Rotting Pear

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The Bruised and Rotting Pear

Certain moments make this all worthwhile

'Random' presets left but to defile 


Blink your eyes to see the flash of white

Blink once more to gain a different sight


Milliseconds gazing at the stars

In which I understood you as you are


And in that time the notion came to me

A sigh of love bled out of honesty


The story of a bruised and rotting pear

That learned to dance on wind and open air

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  1. Date: 2/23/2011 12:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Yoni. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 2:33:00 PM
    Hi Yoni - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 6:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Debbie's contest with this entry. Your presentation contains considerably vivid descriptiveness.

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 5:28:00 PM
    Congrats Yoni on your HM in Debbie's contest with this excellent entry my friend.. hope u are doing well... enjoy your very special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 3:09:00 PM
    Please enter this in my free verse contest! [Where have YOU been? Any babies yet?;)]Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/30/2009 12:41:00 PM
    Eureka!!!! to my fav's Brilliant blazing unburning comforting LIGHT and Love

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 1:44:00 PM
    Another great write, best of luck in the next round...Raul

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 3:17:00 PM
    Haunting write here and I don't know that I could choose between the two you have in this contest Yoni!! Wonderful writing and good luck to you!!

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 9:46:00 PM
    great you! Yoni...congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 7:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured Yoni. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 4:18:00 PM
    Wonderful write! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 8:41:00 AM
    Yoni what a beautiful couplet - Congratulations on being featured - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 8:37:00 AM
    Beautifully written and intriguing, Love the title...Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.God Bless*Tyesha

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 9:13:00 AM
    Congrats Yoni, on being featured this week .Vince

  1. Date: 2/23/2009 3:52:00 PM
    Yoni, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 2:27:00 PM
    Interesting piece to ponder. Powerful. Nice use of rhyme. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! I hope you have a wonderful New Year! Karen

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 6:26:00 PM
    Another provocative write from you, Yoni that reads almost like a ballad. Beautifully done. Hope you have a warm, safe Happy New Year!

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 12:01:00 PM
    '...love bled out of honesty' is a magnificent phrase... compelling couplet rhyming and true poetic imagery. BRAVO Yoni! Best wishes, Keith