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If my spirit was a color,
it would be psychedelic,
as beautiful as a rainbow ~
If my spirit were a taste,
it would be just like honey dew.
If my spirit were a feeling,
it would be as lovely as a spring day.
If my spirit were a smell,
it would be as sweet as a magnolia in bloom.
If my spirit were a sound,
it would be as harmonious as a sweet symphony
If you would receive of my joy,
I'd share it with all of you ~

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  1. Date: 1/19/2009 1:25:00 PM
    I really like this one. The use of multiple sense imagery is definitely a real strength in this poem. Love the last line. It gives the reader a personal touch. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 12:47:00 PM
    such a nice piece with a short title. some times all it takes is one word and you used it well. john

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 5:09:00 AM
    How lovely. Who would not want to be in the midst of such beauty? I would accept in an instant! Love, Shar