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Alleviated

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Alleviated

Broken, shattered, you splatter it all
Sky blue crystals of a bled dry heart
Beating fiercely from a precipice fall
Of love (false) whispers find a start
Festering with a tattered shawl
Ballooning out to shred apart
            
             A blushing dream of sweetest hue
             Unrequited..... (be it) the clue

Multi colors bleed from hands
You splash the canvas painting pain
A bleeding story unfolds and lands
with swirls of red, an angry rain
Blue and black intermingle and brand
Arrayed in light, this brilliant stain
      
        Heart breaks tempest found its cease
        Formed in its wake, a masterpiece.....

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  1. Date: 1/2/2009 10:09:00 AM
    Just awesome Christie awesome !

  1. Date: 12/31/2008 2:35:00 AM
    Festering with a tattered shawl Ballooning out to shred apart A blushing dream of sweetest hue Unrequited..... (be it) the clue picturing the colofullness and angry rain- enjoyed these images noted! Again, Very good gem Christie!! Like the title too!

  1. Date: 12/29/2008 3:35:00 PM
    Awesome Christie, the first time I've seen this form done! Very vivid & creative! Excellent write. Thanks :) for your comment on "What's on the Cover." It's a subject close to my heart -your little niece, poor thing, she's too little to have to worry about that! At her age it shouldn't even cross her mind. :( That's why I wrote this poem... I see that kind of thing happening with younger & younger girls, each one is special no matter what she looks like, even some guys wrestle with it. Love, Amy

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 7:31:00 PM
    This a MASTERPIECE! Christtie> I am blown away by the ending. SIMPLY INCREDIBLE WRITING. LAINIE

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 6:36:00 PM
    You poured a lot of compassionate passion into this write dear lady~a sign of a very beautiful selfless heart I believe~straight from the depths of "Your Blessed & Gifted Soul!"~In the end, though the write was bittersweet~"It painted yourseld very profoundly beautiful!!"~"My Love Always To You & Your Loves, Forever, John!"~Bye Beautiful Christie Moses!:)

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 6:31:00 PM
    Amid the darkest of the nights!!~In this case here, it would be ones pain, poured upon a canvas, with a passion so deeply felt, that a masterpiece was born upon the tails of it burning wake~this could also transcend itself unto writers; actually I believe, even more so! For there is nothing more powerful, than the written word I believe!!~cont~

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 6:25:00 PM
    "Sky blue crystals of a bled dry heart"~Hmmm, that's not a very good place to be, is it dear!? "Hello Beautiful & Precious Christie Moses!"~I sincerely hope that "Your Christmas" went well for you & your priceless daughter dear! And I have somewhat missed "You"~although its been only but a moment of time~still, it seems like forever?!Smile~ What a sadness for this lady here-whomever she may be!? And yes, I have always said, that "God" does His very best work~cont~

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 6:14:00 PM
    such an eloquent and heart-felt write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 3:14:00 PM
    Beautiful.......Great expression of feelings.....Janice

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 2:20:00 PM
    Wonderful work...the imagery here is astounding. Ths last bit is inspired. Love, BG

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 5:49:00 AM
    I love 'splattered/shatter/tattered...' This could be a tribute to Van Gogh. Excellent in every way! Love, me

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 3:38:00 AM
    Beautiful! I want to see this painting! lol Did you paint one, too? Awesome Christie, love Kristin

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 12:56:00 AM
    Love the couplet imagery Christie..poems within poems.Great diversity in your poetic form of late.Excellent.Rgds Brian & hanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 3:49:00 PM
    ah, the poems after christmas. the scoffers at santa cry out with various reasons i'm sure. john very good by the way

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 12:38:00 PM
    This write is vivid and deep and rich with imagery and wonderful prases. Lots of passion. I am learnig much from everyone here. Thank you for all your thoughtful comments. I love being on this site. Great write, Christie! Love Robin

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 12:20:00 PM
    This was very unique, the imagery amazing...I liked the last line "Formed in its wake, a masterpiece..." very good ending.:) Love, Sara

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 10:22:00 AM
    Well Christie, this is the real masterpiece. Loved each line of this exquisite write. Beautiful language and usage of lovely lovely words. Second stanza really shows your beauty with words!! Goes in my favs....Very absorbing!! Take care...Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 8:48:00 AM
    Wow, this is a good description of venting out through art. Something we all relate with. I had a good Christmas, I hope you had one too. Happy New Year...Raul

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 8:05:00 AM
    Great write Christie. This poem moves with so much beauty and love. I love the second stanza...Multi colors bleed from hands You splash the canvas painting pain..wonderfully done. Much love, Chris.

  1. Date: 12/26/2008 7:48:00 AM
    Well, this poem is a masterpiece, though I know that is not how you meant it. I am guessing to everything bad comes good, and the silver lining of your pain and heartache indeed is something bright and beautiful. Love how you entwined art on the canvas for your emotional expression. Love, Shar

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