Much said in just two lines. Interesting that we expect others to do what we aren't willing to practice. Good job! Karen

Sounds like you need a hug.

This one really set me thinking. So much crammed into only two lines. Excellent.

When it comes to virtue, absence makes the heart grow fonder is an adage she might try avoiding. Food for thought. Have a Happy and successful New Year, John. Vince

How the heck did I miss this amazing epigram from John Heck??!! Made me laugh, and for sure is one of the best! Somehow, I almost overlooked clicking on...but gave me a smile this morning! A sure-fire winning Double Take!!~ Love, Carrie

Good one John, Very clever. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Blessings.

Very clever, John! Best of luck in the contest! Donna

This is amazingly clever. I am still attempting to enter this one. Brian sure makes us think, doesn't he? Good luck, not that you will need it. I love the title. Love Christie

Made me smile. So very clever and unfortunately so bitter true. Well done. Love Heidie

Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words about my poetry. Love, Joyce

Masterful example of a DOUBLE TAKE. I love these contests - they bring out the best! Thank you for your continued support, John. Much appreciated. Love, Lainie

For soothe and in truth, John. How could it be said better? Have a fabulous New Year, with more of your fabulous poetry. Love, daver

Love the take on the double take. Cleverly done. Thanks so much for the warmest comments on my poetry. Happy New Year to you and your love ones.

And, I quite certain that I shall enjoy your soulful & gifted writings!~"Again, My Love & Warmth To You & All You Love, Always, John!"~"Happy New Year John Heck~Bye!":)

Ahh yes, something amiss, within I would say her perceptions of the relativities of tit for tat!? Smile~to be hung upon the wire, is not very good for ones heart~but I am from an old bloodline~"The man is the king of his own castle---I would probably leave her, sooner than later, stuck up there within that window~Smile~I really like and enjoy your writing form and style dear brother! Truely, somewhat unique from what I have mostly seen around here in over two years~cont~

good wit, clever write-thank you for the kind words -Fritz

few words beautifully felt, hi John I hope that you are well, take care D-nyce

I really like the title of this one. Creative approach to the contest. Good luck! I hope you have a wonderful New Year! Keep up the good writing. Karen

Thanks for your kind words about my poem John.A compliment indeed from a 'master 'poet.Rgds Brian & may your writing be especially inspirational in 2009

Thank you for your comment, John. Have a Merry Christmas and a poetic New Year :) Love, iolanda