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Ode to Chocolate

Ode to Chocolate   :)
     by Amy Swanson  12/15/2008


                 Deliciously inviting
             Tempting to my tongue
               Silky chocolate velvet
               Whether milk or dark
                  Candy, cocoa too-
                     Melts in mouth
                      ~ Mmmmm! ~

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  1. Date: 3/9/2009 8:18:00 AM

    mmmmm!!! isn't it... sorry i took this late!! well yours sure is more yummy!! but there sure is nothing like a choco... love this one... and this is going into my favs!! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 2/28/2009 12:29:00 AM

    This complements your footle so well Amy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 6:35:00 PM

    Mouth-watering poem! Lip-smacking, delectable, and yummmmmy! Enjoy it and bon apetit! Ruben.

  1. Date: 12/29/2008 7:27:00 PM

    You said a mouthful! My downfall - lovely chocolate!

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 4:30:00 AM

    Getting caught up with your poetry, Amy. Mmmm! Yes! Personally I'm a milk chocolate freak. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/18/2008 5:27:00 PM

    tempting. you might like "Mirrica" and "to deeneen white"

  1. Date: 12/18/2008 3:41:00 PM

    Hello my kindred friend. I have thought from the start that you were so much like me. Now I know! LOL I also wrote one on Chocalate and It is my secret crush. I just love and adore it, so of course I wrote a love poem about it! LOL Love this and now i have to go find my hiding place! Heehee YUM! Love and hugs to you and your little girl, me

  1. Date: 12/18/2008 1:31:00 PM

    mmmm my mouth is watering from this. Awesome write my friend. ~Michaela~

  1. Date: 12/17/2008 12:56:00 AM

    Yum. The ONLY bad thing about chocolate is it goes straight to your hips!!!! Loved this write. Happy holidays.....Aleera

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 5:38:00 AM

    Yes, you are talking my language now. I actually dedicated a poem to chocolate too! Awesome delicious write! Happy holidays! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 12/15/2008 5:51:00 PM

    A girl after my own heart ........a fellow chocoholic!! MMMmmmm! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/15/2008 4:56:00 PM

    Can never get enough..this is so yummy. BG