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  1. Date: 7/19/2010 12:55:00 PM

    Congratulations, Deborah. On your ace in this competition. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 11:27:00 AM

    Congratulations Deb on your well deserved 1st place win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 8:08:00 PM

    gosh, this reminded me a little bit of a list of things someone could make from the 50's. hahaha. cha ching china is RIGHT, DEb. A GREAT win for you. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 5:47:00 PM

    Deborah, Awesome writing and use of words. I will never see the words China the same again. Jerri

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 9:33:00 AM

    I concur with the others Deborah, it's a most deserved write indeed. So many youngsters have made industry in China close to untouchable with costs. India is and will challenge them as the years progress. It's a tough stranglehold to break. Mega congrats to you. Have a wonderful Sunday >> James

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 9:09:00 AM

    This is one of your very best I think..I love the title..something I always have trouble with. congrats to you ! BG

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 5:19:00 AM

    My my Deborah! Glad I found this one! Excellent. Alot of great lines. Such artistic imagery. like esp. tottering tv antennas prick the sky.... ah too many lines to mention...into my favs with this little masterpiece of reality. A wonderful work for many reasons, Deborah. .-Robert

  1. Date: 1/26/2010 10:26:00 PM

    Deborah, Your poem is so well crafted and creative. It is very deserving of winning. Congratulations. You are a very talented poet. I will keep an eye open for more of your work. Blessings, Connie P.S. I am new here and still learning the ropes.

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 9:20:00 PM

    Very picturesque Deborah. Well deserved win. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/16/2010 9:17:00 AM

    Hi Deb., Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, "Cha-Ching China" is one of my favorite poems. I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it, again. Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations Deborah, on your well deserved placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I am excited for you. Your winning poem is so strong and brings to focus an American social dilemma. Our money (land, food, corporations and even people...) is going away... to foreign powers. VERY well said. I am so glad that you won with this poem. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 2:47:00 AM

    These powerful images you paint take me there. MAGNIFICENT writing, CONGRATULATIONS! on you win, Deb, Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 4:52:00 AM

    This is Hong Hong everyone. Bejing is a all senses of the! Hong Hong is very HOT friendly to a fault..and doable for a westerner. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 6:43:00 PM

    congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 12:33:00 PM

    Good to see your name in the winners circle. Congratulations on your 7th place win in the Poetry Soup contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 11:13:00 AM


  1. Date: 10/14/2009 6:50:00 PM

    I love the jaggedness and angular imagery in this. It feels like a bomb went off in your second verse and destroyed something very precious, only to be replaced by the the cookie cutter mold fitting society you and I grew up in, with a Mickey D's on every corner. This feels like you wrote it while walking the streets of Beijing, soaking it all in, the lights and herds of tourists spending their dollars on stupid trinkets. Or maybe I just read into it too much again...I do that:) Congradts again

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 6:45:00 PM

    honestly I still think this is way more complex than my 'winner' poem. I'm not even sure what it's doing there in the number 2 spot, surrounded by all these complex masterpieces, my simple little Rondeau which Kristin actually helped me write...well there you have it, this time you get to be on Cloud 7 wise one. Sincerest congratulations on your win Deb. I hope it brought you as much joy as it did me to see us both in the top 10:)

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 2:44:00 PM

    I like the idea and the way you manage language; when read outloud, feels funny in my mouth jojjo thanks for the experience, congrats!!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 2:01:00 PM

    great writing, congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 11:24:00 AM

    Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 9:02:00 AM

    Absolutely wonderful! Vividly beautiful descriptions! I admired this masterpiece as much as I would a Clark Hulings painting.

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 4:07:00 AM

    HURRAY! YIPPEE! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! A well deserved WIN, my dear sister! You did good! Love and hugs, Robin

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 3:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Deborah. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 12:08:00 AM

    Congrats on your success in the PS june contest Debbie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 10:13:00 PM

    ><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. ~<><

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:54:00 PM

    Deborah Congratulations! Well deserved. Potent and descriptive. Very well thought out and clear imagery. Loved it.

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:27:00 PM

    Hi Debbie, Congrats on your 7th place win in the finals!! I'm very happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:02:00 PM

    Hooray had a winning poem....out of all these entries...look who's made it among the top winning poems!!!! Hearty congrats to you!!! Great work! ~ Love, Carrie Hip hip hooray for you!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 4:10:00 PM

    fun to see your work featured! Deb!... jim