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Feet off the ground

Your arms around my neck
My arms around your waist
Holding pattern...

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  1. Date: 12/31/2008 2:38:00 AM

    cute- yummy haiku--Nigel -thank you!!

  1. Date: 11/28/2008 3:00:00 PM

    The last line makes this one! Enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

  1. Date: 11/28/2008 12:39:00 PM

    Awww. however this came to be, it is love. love, Kristin

  1. Date: 11/28/2008 8:48:00 AM

    SWEET! What a lovely little poem, Nigel! ...Makes me smile! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 11/27/2008 8:31:00 AM

    What a beautiful picture this paints, Nigel. Perfect moment... suspended. To use your own words..."Brilliant". Love Robin

  1. Date: 11/27/2008 8:23:00 AM

    NIgel, I feel completely incompetent after reading your work. This is just terrific. I think this may be the first time I've teared up over a haiku..:). BG

  1. Date: 11/27/2008 8:17:00 AM

    This is adorable. What a cute title, and such precious contents. Yes, you do make us swoon! lol Love your tired friend Me