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Causeway of hope

Neptune grant me leave
To build a causeway
Across your waters
A barrier reef
To connect two souls

Thor's hammer strong
Will smite these rocks
No mountain chain
Will I endure

Until I
Hold you close
And can kiss

The tears
From your

Cheeks

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  1. Date: 11/24/2008 7:08:00 PM

    Hi Nigel, lovely write as usual. I've been gone for a day or so and have to catch up..I did start to read your latest blog and responses.Terrific. Please don't worry about the -sea- and I reference, response. As the say down under "no worries".. Anxious to get back into the swing with you all. BG

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 5:57:00 PM

    Lovely to read, and interesting unusual form, ....I love the theme of the mystical romance, Nigel! Very original! Nicely done, as are all your works! I enjoy reading what you write! :) ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 4:34:00 PM

    What a beautiful Dim hex! You are such an inspiration, my friend. I LOVE the second stanzas lines. Well, I just love all of it. It made me misty eyed! I told you not to do that anymore!LOL Love your friend, Tink