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A candle on the sea

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A candle on the sea

For you I'll make an ocean
Where you'll never have to hide
I'll fill it with devotion
And pour love upon the tide

        For you these waters bide...

The waves they will embrace you
On that warm supporting sea
The current, it will guide you through
And bring your flame to me

        The things you always wanted...you will see

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  1. Date: 3/6/2009 9:03:00 AM
    This one is so beautiful. Just had to come by and comment again. Love Tink

  1. Date: 11/21/2008 3:13:00 AM
    brilliant

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 9:31:00 PM
    Oh my my, this is so romantic! So much love in there. I agree with all, lucky lady:) Very touchy. Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 5:33:00 PM
    You have such a sweet romantic side! Lucky lady out there, my, oh, my! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 4:59:00 PM
    You are making someone feel very happy. I sense a special kind of love in the air. : ) I don't blame her, this beautiful write shows what a giving, caring soul you are. Truly heartwarming. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 4:22:00 PM
    Perfect poem..I had a bad afternoon and this has made me cry...your woman is so lucky..BG

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 3:59:00 PM
    I love the ending of this poem Nigel. The promise that must be kept...letting them know if they take a chance it will all workout. Beautiful write Nigel.

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 3:18:00 PM
    You probably can't see these eyes, can you? Yep, they're misty. Why must you always make me cry? This is so beautiful. I LOVE this so much. Your friend forever, Me