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The Bee

Lavenders aroma calls
The humble bumble,
Honey awaits all.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2008 10:32:00 AM

    'humble bumble, honey,' ...marvelous assonance! Lovely flow and word selections. BRAVO Ann! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 11/17/2008 5:32:00 AM

    There's an innocence to this read that makes it as sweet as the honey itself. The flow is smooth and tone zperfect for the form and clarity. Michael

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 4:17:00 PM

    Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. The rhyme in the second line gives your poem a lighthearted feel. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 3:14:00 PM

    Good one..touch of humor..BG

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 1:53:00 PM

    Adorable picture this one paints. Love the humble bumble line. Cute, cute, cute. Love Christie

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 1:52:00 PM

    Cute and sweet little Haiku! Nicely done! :) Carrie

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 1:15:00 PM

    This is a very sweetly written Haiku. Great job.

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 12:20:00 PM

    I would take the s off of lavender but that's just me. Good!