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The Ocean (Hybridanelle)

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The Ocean (Hybridanelle)

Moving ridges - blue, green salty de-bree
Lightly, sweep the beach;
As inland rolls the sea

All species, shapes shells' species,
Tumble to shore, scoured by wind, by sand
Frothed, hi-lo crests, toss, create odd creases

Ocean sounds, subdued to loud
Galaxies twinkling, twinkling, over sandy shore
Moving ridges - blue, green, salty de-bree

Limicoline birds probe of tiny beaks
Cerripedes cling - of rock jetty walls
Tumble to shore, scoured by wind, by sand

Dephinidae family-play, chirrups avow
Perceived near silted edge
As inland rolls the sea

Blessed - this Shangri-la
Peace, quiet soul
Creation, presented us

Euphony, miles around
Tunes linger over moist earth
Moving ridges - blue, green salty de-bree

Humility - our
Ever-so-ever thankful
Peace, quiet soul

Waves' tumble, night does endow
Loose sand - wet clay
As inland rolls the sea

Visons 'cross vast waters
Ruffles of promise dapple there
Ever-so-ever thankful

Righteous melodies heard
Moon casts it's shadow
Moving ridges - blue, green salty de-bree
As inland rolls the sea

Placidity drowns fears
All shells, shapes, species
Ruffles of promise dapple there
Frothed, hi-lo white caps, toss, creates odd creases

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  1. Date: 1/14/2012 10:35:00 PM
    Dear Ginny, Well I see a double maybe triple Congratulations On making the Semi-finals In POETRY SOUP Contest Being Featured And Writting such a Superb Verse " The Ocean ( Hybridanelle ) " " A Classis to the History of POETRY " and to My Favorite POEM and POET LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry ( HG )

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 9:31:00 AM
    An exceptional poem about the Ocean, crafted so well>>James

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 6:46:00 PM
    Virginia, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 4:39:00 AM
    Wonderful imagery--wonderful message!!! Congratulations on having this creative poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 12:03:00 AM
    This write is filled with such great imagery. Well deserved feature... Congratulations. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 9:10:00 AM
    Congratulations Virginia, on "The Ocean (hybridanelle)" being featured this week. Vince

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem just lovely! Laura :)

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 10:12:00 AM
    Thanks to all of you for your wonderful, warm crits of my poem. I appreciate your comments so much. Thanks again to all of you. Blessings Ginny

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 10:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 8:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. Great imagery! Kirstie

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 10:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on this peaceful, ocean poem being among the featured this week!! Well done!!~ Carrie

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 5:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 1/17/2009 11:19:00 AM
    Dear Virginia, I am not farmiliar with this form. I will investiage. wonderful poem! Congratulations on your feature this week. Love and peace, Lainie

  1. Date: 1/14/2009 3:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul

  1. Date: 1/12/2009 8:22:00 AM
    I am so glad you all enjoyed "The Ocean". It is one of my favorite places. Makes it easy to write about. I'm just getting used to using this site and am not sure how to comment to you each individually, so again, thanks to all. Blessings, Ginny

  1. Date: 1/12/2009 7:03:00 AM
    Congratulations Virginia on your poem being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 1/12/2009 5:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Virginia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2009 4:28:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 1/11/2009 1:30:00 PM
    A lovely poem ..I love poems of the ocean! Congratulations on this one being featured! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 1/11/2009 12:19:00 PM
    Congratulations Virginia on your very beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar