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SEA Surf

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                                                                                                                   I   am an
                                                                                               ocean     wave, with  salty
                                                                           breath. An eager blue, cascading
                                                                  fall.  Worshipping       the golden 
                                                 sand with   gentle, flowing    fingers,   tall.    
                             Saliferous   breezes  flurry above   me and wild   surfers
               ride. I waltz upon the sundripped land, with mystical lovers pride. A          
 bewitching    dance of magnificence. Sea horses hide and dolphins spin, to  my resplendent  
embrace, melting like lava from a dorsal fin. Symmetrical, the radiance  that shines, as noon 
time orbs drip a legacy of glory. Matchless, and noble, I stand and tower.  Whispers of an 
astonishing story. I am so driven, and deep blue, clear. Infused with the motions I pave. 
  Falling    tenderly     back    to  the    sea,     with   one   last      perpetual    wave.

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  1. Date: 11/30/2009 10:03:00 PM

    Christie, nice to see your name again and congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 1:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Christie. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 10:48:00 AM

    Very nice poem with a delightful theme and shape, many congrats on your win in Deborah's contest >> James

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 6:00:00 PM

    Simply wonderful, Christie! Congrats on your success in Deborah's contest. Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 11/5/2009 2:28:00 PM

    My brains going coo coo if you haven't entered my contest please enter? fret alshimers? Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 1:39:00 PM

    I waltz upon the sundripped land, with mystical lovers pride. A bewitching dance of magnificence....... sheer GENIUS !!!......... Christie ! my word ! this is magnificent ! Sea horses hide and dolphins spin, to my resplendent embrace, melting like lava from a dorsal fin...... incredible !!!!! just love love love this one !!!!!

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 6:42:00 PM

    Christie, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 6:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on both your poems making it into the semi finals Christie. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 11:43:00 AM

    Great Poem! Congratulations on making it through the first round! Good Luck!~Trudy~

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 1:03:00 PM

    Absolutely brillant, Christie. Why is this "concrete" form and not "shape" as in the wave it looks like? Just curious and really unfamilar with the forms ... LOL ... beautifully done and Congratulations on your 2nd write being featured this week!! Way to go!!

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 1:07:00 PM

    wonderful form Christie!...this poem explains every single detail about the wave in such a lovely way....nice job n congrats on its feature...Maryam*

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 8:59:00 AM

    Congratulations Christie for this very creative write "Sea Surf" being featured. You just know an old sailor is gonna love this one. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 7:11:00 AM

    This flows very nicely, Christie. Love your layout.Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:49:00 PM

    congrats on the feature my KY friend

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 10:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved feature write! Kirstie

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:37:00 AM

    Christie. the sea comes alive with wonderfully, illuminating emotion! love it, Jim,...what a great feature!

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 1:37:00 PM

    Well Christie I'm not surprised to see your poem featured after all I loved it too! Congratulation on a masterful poem !! Love Laura :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 11:43:00 AM

    Very nicely penned, great write. congrats

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 4:58:00 AM

    Congrats on being featured-- :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 4:21:00 AM

    Congrats on the feature homie...

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 12:49:00 AM

    Congrats on your feature this week Christie.A picture indeed.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 5:46:00 PM

    A double feature??? SO WELL DESERVED! You rock lady! Congratulations once again!! Awesome! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 6:02:00 PM

    What else can I say? Totally awesome! -Always Alexandra

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 4:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Christie. I thought your poem was deservedly rewarded and superb. I love the combination of structure and imagery. I entered with hopes for maybe an honorable mention but didn't quite make the grade. Nice work. Randy Biffany

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 12:39:00 PM

    Christie, congratulations on winning this contest, this write and you so derserve that honor. Marvelous work! Michael

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 8:46:00 AM

    Dear Christie - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Laura's contest! Peace always, John

  1. Date: 3/3/2009 11:54:00 PM

    Congrats on your success in Laura's contest Christie Rgd Brian

  1. Date: 3/3/2009 6:42:00 PM

    Christie congratulations on your win - well deserved and an excellent piece of work both visually and in the way it was written - God Bless, YF4L - MJ

  1. Date: 3/3/2009 6:26:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, lovely poem, very nicely done.. spirit and soul, constance

  1. Date: 3/3/2009 9:18:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!!! This is a beautiful piece. So many images such little time :) Your poetry always leaves me in awe. Well done - Jason

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