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The Snake

"What's the worst that could happen?" she said,
When we went to the zoo,

"We might see something interesting, 
Perhaps there's something new."

But new exhibit wasn't there,
It was nowhere to be found,

The keepers scratched their struck-dumb heads,
And went searching all around,

But she remained quite cheerful, 
Though I was filled with dread,

Especially when "Largest Snake Coming Soon!" 
Was on sign I read,

But she watched not where she stepped,
And soon then met her fate,

She screamed (While away I hastened) 
And eventually got ate

I guess there's some kind of moral, though,
That I have yet to see,

Except that I know, Zoo's no place to go,
When the Movies appeal more to me.

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  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:26:00 PM

    I don't like snakes and I'm not a fan of lawyers. I wonder if there's a connection. Your poetry is good, fun to read. Vince

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 2:06:00 PM

    haha your quite amazing keep it up=]]TinkBabyy

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 1:38:00 PM

    Brilliant poem Deneith, and very funny, and so fantastically written, it made me laugh.. Wonderful.. Thankyou for your comments on my poem, I like that you answered the question at the end, that was great, thankyou...! Best wishes, Jo xx

  1. Date: 10/24/2008 10:19:00 PM

    ah! adore it_keep it up!!

  1. Date: 10/19/2008 1:41:00 PM

    This is so funny really enjoyed great write. Blessings Michael Torres.