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Amity


The wind is strong, the sky so 
gray
The storm seems not to abate
Your heart embarks on peril 
voyage.
O! he falls into the abyss of 
disarray

The storm is great, the dust 
forms cloud
The dust is like a vibrant 
ocean tide
The heart is in the heart of 
Saharah desert
O! she can't find an oasis

Having a genuine and candid 
pal
Amidst this ferocious weather
Is like drinking a cool water 
In the heart of Saharah desert

With them, our hearts are 
mended
Like the celestial Angels,
They hold us up when 
Our wings are broken

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  1. Date: 10/12/2008 8:23:00 AM

    This is an excellent poem. I really like the last paragraph a lot regarding the celestial angel. Great job and welcome to poetry Soup! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 5:26:00 AM

    Wonderful poem you have penned - God Bless