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I want to feel inspired,
To write a poem I try.
Yet tonight I feel so tired
Almost about to cry.
I am trying hard to think,
Of what I have to say.
My thoughts are at the brink.
Isn’t there any way?!
To write what I feel
‘Bout this boy who is anew.
This feeling, so surreal
But for once I am true.
I float on a cloud
And no longer am I blue.
For I finally found
My poem in you.

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  1. Date: 4/3/2009 8:49:00 PM
    nice poem................................................its just the representation of ur feeling.

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 8:50:00 AM
    What a perfect way to express your feelings, and yes...we all stumble at times to get the words out. You said it beautifully! Keep writing...you have so much heart! ~ :) Carrie

  1. Date: 10/11/2008 5:48:00 PM
    hi I like this write, you might enjoy my write, writer's block, I like the flow of this, thanks for your comment, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 10/10/2008 12:41:00 PM
    Lucky person! Cute love poem. God Bless. Vince