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There is a magic zing-- a nice warm cheer
When with eyes, a-twinkling
On soft shoulders, each-clinging
Two hearts attuned, are singing.

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  1. Date: 10/24/2008 10:04:00 PM

    what atune!! adore!

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 2:13:00 PM

    Nice like use of this challenging form. Interesting title--and it rhymes with the lines. I like the lighthearted feel of this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for you kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 9/30/2008 3:14:00 PM

    two is always better than one, someone to share your highs and lows of life, great write, take care D-nyce