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Broken

I have loved you for so long
I tried to hide it but the feeling is too strong
I know angel that loving you is wrong
But what can I do if you are my heart's only song 

Would it be better if I just forget about you?
Tell myself to stop feeling the way I do
Go out with other girls, try to find someone new
Convince myself that I could still find love that is true 

Would your life be better if I just stay away?
Tell me dear and your wishes I will obey
I will do whatever you want, whatever you say
Even if having a broken heart is the price I have to pay 

My heart is already bleeding at the thought of it all
Angel you have a way of making me feel so small
Sometimes I just want to bang my head against the wall
For I know that your heart already belongs to Raul.






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  1. Date: 9/28/2008 4:39:00 PM

    So heartfelt and sad I am sorry your heart is broken I hope things work out for you! Well written! Laura :(

  1. Date: 9/28/2008 5:00:00 AM

    you're not alone man! this is a good channel to express yourself and though this is intimate and personal, we feel honored nonetheless for your sharing of your pain! Keep the faith bro!

  1. Date: 9/28/2008 4:10:00 AM

    Hello John - a very deep poem covering a very touchy subject - Well written piece - God Bless