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I love you no more

I have so much anticipation 
Love always in supplication
Over a cup of tea to think it over and over again
Vend this yearning that abuse my mind
Exhausted with your banter acts
You confused me with your synthetic laughs
Owed me with so much love
Unaware of your context move
Now I’m awake with this contusion
Out of the blue, it’s come a new you
Mine you if I tell you I’m not in love with you
Oh! Could I say it loud?
Right, I heard you say why?
End is now my dear lover.

(Acrostic form)
Lie
17/9/08

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  1. Date: 6/10/2014 8:01:00 AM
    Hi Lena, great write - we have to know when someone is not the one and when to move on! Thank you for sharing this gem!

  1. Date: 5/30/2014 3:23:00 PM
    well expressed the end of a love thanks for your kind words on my poems

    empino Avatar lena empino
    Date: 5/31/2014 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Diane thanks for this warmth comment too.
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 1:19:00 AM
    The last line is so sadly definitive. "Now I awake with this contusion..." very meaningful, and original. Abuse of the mind as you say, fascinating Lena. Tough poetry. J.A.B.

    empino Avatar lena empino
    Date: 5/29/2014 2:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks I love to write a poem base on what I feel at the moment and express it thoroughly through words. Thanks for this wonderful comment Justin.
  1. Date: 5/22/2014 10:57:00 PM
    good one done in acrostic form!! I enjoyed the read.

    empino Avatar lena empino
    Date: 5/26/2014 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea for your kind comment.
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Another wonderful poem...confused me with your synthetic laughs..many people do this....I'm finding out....so sad people do this to each other...

    empino Avatar lena empino
    Date: 5/26/2014 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    we cannot avoid it Donna... there are few people who are not so real. Thanks for this warmth comment.