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The Sea of Sorrow

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The Sea of Sorrow

A deep dark grief,
stolen your loved, that hateful thief.

Away from here that soul did depart,
away from us, away from the heart.

That feeling of barren and cold,
when a loss be there, truth be told.

A lifetime to live, does it take,
a second to die, yor breath will break

No count, on what will be,
the next minute is planned by thee

No words, of what to explain,
that numbness, of that sad pain.

Undefined it so is, of are every breath
at the end, is only death.

A deep dark grief,
stolen your loved, that hateful thief.

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  1. Date: 11/30/2008 6:36:00 AM
    Mehak - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 4:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 8:39:00 AM
    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/4/2008 11:11:00 PM
    Mehak - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 11:48:00 AM
    Mehak, Heartiest congratulations on your poem The Sea of Sorrow being featured this week. The honour is well deserved for a new entrant to the PoetrySoup. Your poem is a beautiful write, indeed. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 6:53:00 PM
    Mehak congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God bless

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 4:40:00 PM
    lovely pen

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 8:34:00 AM
    Congratulations Mehak, on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

  1. Date: 10/27/2008 9:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/26/2008 5:13:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 10/26/2008 3:30:00 PM
    Oh so very sad. Congratulations Mehak on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar