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A Letter to My Father

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A Letter to My Father

You broke my heart
You shattered my dreams
You've missed almost everything
Now your back and I can't think
I fear my thoughts that you might leave
Gone again can't be found
Years gone by and not a sound
Now your here, I hope to stay
I love you dad in every way
Please promise me your here to stay
And
Will not loose another day

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  1. Date: 2/7/2009 9:44:00 PM
    Absolutely beautiful write.

  1. Date: 8/29/2008 6:27:00 AM
    Your Dad is a good man who knows he's made some bad choices as we all have in our lives. He's an inspiration for the underdog. God Bless both of you. A daughter's love is one of life's greatest blessings. Vince

  1. Date: 8/24/2008 8:20:00 PM
    hi it is always heart-wrenching to read these kind or writes, yet it's necessary and a catharsis, my father is still alive yet you would never know it because he never was around, hopefully you and your father can mend your fences and he can be the father that you desire, great write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 8:02:00 PM
    youre very good at writing about difficult situations and painful memories and a positive way. i admire how you maturely look at the situation and how you dont focus on the past but look brightly at the future and progress. i hope things continue to improve and i hope you stay strong and blessed although i have the srongest feeling you will :) Kristina,15

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 5:27:00 PM
    this was a heart felt piece of poetry and praying that everything works out ok, this was a great poem.

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 7:23:00 AM
    Hi Honey - As hard as these words are for me to read I'm glad that you are constructively expressing your feelings. As I stated in one of my books it was your love that helped me become the father I am for Michaela. I love you with all my heart honey and if I could do it over I would. Love you and great job expressing your feelings, left me in tears - God Bless hon, Dad

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 5:39:00 AM
    oh I'm sure your dad will stay in touch one has to grow and love thy self before he can love another and knowing your dad he wants to make it right now just knowing he is back should make that light shine alittle brighter and think you are still number 1 and has a little sister now you can share with children can bring together with just their smiles keep on sharing and beleiving it will happen once again

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 4:59:00 AM
    Another emotional outpouring of love. Father and daughter have such a special bond. Beautiful write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/22/2008 5:45:00 PM
    I pray that this reunion will bring both of you such a tight connection, that there never, ever be doubts again. Blessings to you both. A tender poem, Sarah.......Your friend in poetry...Carrie