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TRANSCENDENCE

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TRANSCENDENCE

The distant mountain is ablaze
Sun    rain    clouds blend majesty

From my perch on the lookout hill
All land between is ocean

Clouds    like white waves    obscure the Earth
I bathe in that transcendence

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  1. Date: 5/6/2014 10:54:00 AM
    Beautifully crafted imagery... an enjoyable read.

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    Thanks Lily. Love, daver
  1. Date: 5/13/2011 7:08:00 PM
    Daver.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 4:35:00 PM
    A lovely picture..well done Dave-r..congrats on being featured. BG

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 8:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Daver. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 4:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, daver

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 5:34:00 PM
    Congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..a super great write to share with us all my friend with luv...

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 1:46:00 PM
    this is awesome, a FAV!! (and yes, I often hunger just to eat good food I think you and I both love food too much!)

  1. Date: 3/2/2009 7:48:00 AM
    Hello Daver. This is a breathtaking Tanka. I love it from beginning to end. Those last two lines are like a renewal for the spirit. Very awesome writing. Love Christie

  1. Date: 10/22/2008 12:21:00 PM
    of succeeding at the dementional shift that is coming...things about to transpire have been known by all ancient men/religions/tribes for thoughsands of yrs, and it is due again to occur come 2012. anyway...hope this makes sense! Take care, Kristin

  1. Date: 10/22/2008 12:19:00 PM
    Hey Mr. Daver! This seemed like a good title from which to try to explain Beneath God's Mt. Well, have you ever read any Z. Sitchin? It is mostly based on his studies, and the studies of the God's/2012 from the perspective of all major religions of today and yesterday coming to the same conclusions...how this universe and all universes/planets/beings are watching us and waiting to see what happens/what the colective consciousness of here will end up as...if we are capable od succeeding...

  1. Date: 8/13/2008 1:53:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery in this short format. The creative spacing adds visual interest and gives the reader a bit of a pause. Interesting reflection. Karen

  1. Date: 8/13/2008 12:43:00 PM
    You painted a perfect picture of what you wrote. A very refreshing piece of poetry.

  1. Date: 8/13/2008 7:30:00 AM
    Sounds like a breathtaking place to be. Vince

  1. Date: 8/12/2008 4:53:00 PM
    Such a vivid and beautiful mental picture this evokes. Well done. Regards Heidie

  1. Date: 8/12/2008 2:15:00 PM
    This takes my spirit away to a place I already am in my knowing. You bring it to life with such beautiful poetic vision, that I just want to sit appreciate it for awhile. Thanks for sharing hun. Blessings to you and yours. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 8/12/2008 1:42:00 PM
    Visually awe-inspiring. I would love to be there. Glorious. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/12/2008 9:05:00 AM
    Gorgeous, Daver! Wow, so clear and awesome - magestic write from the soul - awesome, love Kristin

  1. Date: 8/12/2008 8:42:00 AM
    These words paint pictures, provide imagery that we as the readers can become a part of. What an effect! Terrific flow and just an awesome read. Michael