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Hmmmm....

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Hmmmm....

So interesting...
I look at my memory sheet 
I sigh
Those words are so.....late
Why did you wait?
What were you thinking....seriously?!
The setting was awkward but... :-)
will definitely be memorable.
I look at my memory sheet...
you struggle for words to describe 
a connection
i hide
painfully i watch you
my moments are few
I look at my memory sheet
hoping that one more line could be added
until there's reason to pull it out again.

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  1. Date: 10/29/2008 10:14:00 AM
    Interesting reflection with a creative format. The title caught me attention. I like the idea of a "memory sheet." Best wishes with your writing. Karen