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TURNING DOWN THE SHEET

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TURNING DOWN THE SHEET

Feminine nature and dominant speed.
Sweet surrender and futile in need.

Empty pages of frivolous lore.
Navigation necessary to explore.

Breaking the tide; neglecting the heart.
Shallow from fear still she did impart.

Polished and bright in the evenings allure.
Insensitive design and intentions impure.

Gladly they wait for her exquisite retreat.
Haughty she'll watch as they turn down the sheet.




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  1. Date: 6/13/2008 1:54:00 PM

    This is very open for interpretation. Sounds almost like someone's true colors were being exposed or something. It was very beautiful, Sara

  1. Date: 6/12/2008 6:27:00 PM

    A sexy write, my dear..sexy and a bit naughty too, I think! Well written mystery. Love Kristin XO

  1. Date: 6/12/2008 4:18:00 PM

    Hmm...not sure how to comment on this one. Sounds like a bit of passion is involved. Impure intentions...uh oh. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 6/12/2008 3:09:00 PM

    This write is wrought with mystery and disguise, interesting write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 6/12/2008 9:08:00 AM

    Ya gotta watch those impure intentions. I knew a guy who acted on them and when he passed away it took the coroner a week to take the smile off his face. Hope all is well. Take care. Vince