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(a peculiar christ)

the dead man does 
himself 
no justice, 
and yet he sees fit 
to bask in his own 
perceived lack 
of glory,

for one without 
thought,
he remains receptive,
idly ignoring the 
calamitous claims 
of those who have 
yet to die,

he remains,
if only for a promise,
a covenant of 
grandiose reckoning,
a covenant of truth,

he remains, 
a dead man,

(a peculiar christ)

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  1. Date: 3/22/2010 3:37:00 AM

    Congrats on your honorable mention... I'm new to poetrysoup feeling very inspired by all this creativity being thought, written and posted....

  1. Date: 3/10/2010 7:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 7:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on having this poem featured.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 11:05:00 PM

    William, congratulations on your featured poem this week.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 10:30:00 PM

    Aye. "For Brutus is an honorable man," and a dead one, too. Twisted ambition dooms. I like your message. 'Grats on your feature.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 11:17:00 AM

    this ie really good.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 3:33:00 AM

    Interesting thoughts that you have conveyed in this featured poem. I could interpertate this several ways with some thought and not exactly sure how you would interpertate what you have written. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 9:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your third place win William. Awesome poem. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 2:42:00 PM

    I love this poem. I see this as praising Christ. Why would he condescend to flesh, why subject himself to injustice, why humble himself before calamitous claims. From an outsider’s perspective, this is “peculiar”. However, for a true Christian, this means LIFE. It’s only peculiar from the “outside” looking in. Let me know if I’m right…

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 10:45:00 AM

    Deep, strong meaning, congrats on placing in the contest. Judy Riley

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 8:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the October 2009 PoetrySoup International Poetry Site Contest Bill. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 7:51:00 PM

    Congratulations William, on the 3rd place win in the Poetry Soup contest. I'm usually not drawn to this style but I was proud to make the exception here. Thanks.

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 3:46:00 PM

    One to ponder here, William and a well-deserved win in the October Soup contest! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 12:53:00 PM

    Odd & interesting..ones wonders if christ is the dead man..yet perhaps not..perhaps it's only ...a man who is dead..then why is the covenant "grandiose" this word seems negative? and yet the covenant is true? I would like to know more about your thought. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 12:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on your brilliant featured poem ! Laura :)

  1. Date: 12/26/2009 12:10:00 PM

    awaiting the judgment day. john h loving iii

  1. Date: 12/23/2009 11:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals William. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 2:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, William! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 11:13:00 AM

    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 5:33:00 AM

    i enjoyed your poem very much. Very interesting and controversial. A breathe of fresh air. Happy holidays!

  1. Date: 12/16/2009 7:28:00 PM

    William, I enjoyed this thoughtful poem. It illuminates many of the questions non-Christians have about the peculiarities of the Messiah concept. Keep exploring the idea, be open to understanding; if you can grasp the need for a savior, then his existance makes more sense, and his "death" serves a living purpose. Overall well-written, and I will definately be reading more of your work.

  1. Date: 12/16/2009 1:36:00 PM

    A difficult concept to grasp..a difficult uncomforting premise..yet a good verse! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/15/2009 12:58:00 PM

    Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James

  1. Date: 12/15/2009 2:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 3:48:00 PM

    congrats on being featured this week

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 11:47:00 AM

    William - many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 8:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Bill. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 6:32:00 AM

    William, an interesting write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 5:17:00 AM

    What a fantastic depth of vision ... what exult of truth ... bravo.

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