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Lips

Twin sets of  crimson lips
Smooth as silk and satin
To the caress and kiss.

Their opening moistness,
It does well slake my thirst
And also inflames me
With a potent desire
To fill you with my being.

Before these twin shrines,
Silver and gleaming,
I kneel and adore
To immerse  myself
In their sweet ichor,
Washing  cares away
In their limpid pools
Where I long to stay.

Bright red and pink the hues
Of those inviting lips
Wherein myself I lose
To join with you as one,
Entwined to fully fuse
Heartbeats in unison.

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  1. Date: 9/20/2009 7:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 8:53:00 PM
    I like the last stanza, Denis! This is splendid, my friend. Congratulations on having this poem featured this week! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 7:47:00 PM
    Love the last stanza of this excellent write, Denis. Congratulations on your writing being selected to be featured this week at the Soup!!

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 1:41:00 PM
    I have a feeling you know how good this is! So sensual and awesome and just plain good! Such a lovely way to look at a woman you're in love with. Congratulations on the feature.

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 9:52:00 AM
    Congratulations friend, on having your poem featured this week. Please keep writing. Great you! Adeleke

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 8:18:00 PM
    Denis - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 1:33:00 AM
    Denis, congrats on having your work featured...Raul

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 3:40:00 PM
    steamy, congrats on being a featured artist!!

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 3:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Denis. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 11:55:00 AM
    Denis, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 1:01:00 PM
    WOW ... very sensual here, Denis and now your writing is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest and keep up the great imagery !!

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 4:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Denis. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol