Below is the poem entitled The Stupidity of me...Self evaluation. [again] which was written by poet
Tofilau. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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Sometimes you think, but
How wrong you are,
What you perceive and hope for is nothing, NOTHING
but a hollow dream, a twisted illusion-a fantasy.
To think that you would have any worth what so ever
to think that anyone would reciprocate feelings that you make believe
that you hope and wish for
It is too bad for no one, NO ONE DOES!!!
You are pathetic, a pitiful, lost and decrepit soul
The feeling you hope and dream for are not there
They NEVER existed...
You are a fool to assume,
stupid, STUPID,STUPID FOOL
Victim of mixed reactions- not a good excuse.
Accept our place LOSER
you there, looking at me from the opposite side of the mirror...
this is you:
Your Name: Vincent
Possible Outcome: Premature DEATH
Relationship status: REJECT
Self Respect: Null & Negative
Self Motivation: Null & Negative
Life Expectancy: 1/2 to 1 year
Self Evaluation: Not Worth the Time...
This is you...me.
You the poor, sweet guy no one likes
the person who is soon left behind and forgotten.
This is the Stupudity of you...
Naive, innocence that has long been obsolete
your analysis of things, lacking of any substance
an antonym of yourself...